Thank you so much!
i really liked how youve used the links that change and add texts. and how the story unfolds. you truly used the tech to create an experience that i havent really seen anywhere else. simple and powerful! well done David!
Your words are very kind. I always worried this one wasn't "gamey" enough, but I guess it doesn't need to be! I was just learning how to use these "text reveal" effects in Twine 1 back then, and I tried to find a few different uses for them.