Don't worry, you didn't come of as rude! You're allowed to have your own opinion, but I appreciate that you were so nice about it^^
I kinda agree with you though... I also think that this game is not as good as "You&Me"! Especially the ending... I rewrote the ending for Y&M several times until I was satisfied, but here I went with like the secound draft TvR
Tbh I have a lot to say on my issues with the writing of this game, but I don't wanna dump all of that on you, so I'll hold back xD
This game was mostly just me trying to write darker content, which was pretty fun! But I also felt like a huge edgelord haha
More puzzeling deaths do sound interesting, but who knows with what I can come up x'D
The main menu between the loops was partly how I interpreted the theme of the jam & a way to highlight the "time-loop"-nature of the game^^ So I'd reather keep it in (It's fine if you didn't lime it though)
Do you have any other feedbacks for this game? :oc If I remade/patch this game I'd like to consider the things you said :3