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Well i played it..  

Ka i'm already become a fan of yours, your beatiful style of drawing is a great feature of all your games. Mmm this game was a gamble with all dark context. For a JAM game it's definitely a good game but (at least for me)  it's not your best work.

It didn't cacth me like "You and me" (And it's not for the murder plot or something like that. I like game like these too). Maybe an different progression of events. A more puzzeling way to make the murders, more details which cacth your attetion betweeen loops (Problaly do not go back to the main screen between loops would be a wise desition). And the true end ... had to be shocking, emotional. Reflexive IDK something which let you feel something. And the feeling who left me was "...Oh ok". 

I don't try to be rude with you. I know is a game which was develop in a pretty short amount of time, and with that in mind is a good work. As your fan i want to provide you with another kind of feedback.

PD: I am studing web development and learning HTML,CSS,JS React . Beside to work i want to use this skills to develop games... To be like you, it was the main reason for i came here because you develop a web version of your games (Hope i draw so well like you someday). I going to make a game soon, when i finish it i will show it to you 

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Don't worry, you didn't come of as rude! You're allowed to have your own opinion, but I appreciate that you were so nice about it^^

I kinda agree with you though... I also think that this game is not as good as "You&Me"! Especially the ending... I rewrote the ending for Y&M several times until I was satisfied, but here I went with like the secound draft TvR

Tbh I have a lot to say on my issues with the writing of this game, but I don't wanna dump all of that on you, so I'll hold back xD

This game was mostly just me trying to write darker content, which was pretty fun! But I also felt like a huge edgelord haha

More puzzeling deaths do  sound interesting, but who knows with what I can come up x'D

The main menu between the loops was partly how I interpreted the theme of the jam & a way to highlight the "time-loop"-nature of the game^^ So I'd reather keep it in (It's fine if you didn't lime it though)

Do you have any other feedbacks for this game? :oc If I remade/patch this game I'd like to consider the things you said :3

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Oh also!!! 

P.S. That's so cool!! I also had some lessons on that, but that was long ago haha

But I'd love to see your game one day :D