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Thanks for a great review, as always, great playthrough ✌
I do wonder however, what specific errors where you talking about with the "English" errors, I mean, I am from U.K. and that's genuinely how I speak and formulate words, well, I don't have an accent, but my primary education is English and I do have C2 level so, really wanted to know what those were. The dialogue is supposed to be a bit campy and early 2000s, so, maybe that's the issue. 
As for the story, I had lot of things in mind, but due to working on 2 projects at the same time, I felt one was more important than the other. In the end, both turned out okay. I am planning on giving the character more back story in the upcoming games, maybe even a sequel or another story. Mason is a flawed character for sure. 

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Hey Niven, I think you kinda misunderstood what I was trying to say. You are fluent in English and I have heard you speak before in your videos but what I was referring to, was the misspelling of words in the game. At 1:25 of my video, the word "interrogation" was spelt incorrectly. At 1:54 of my video, the word "exactly" was spelt wrongly. At 2:06 of my video, it should be "officers" instead of "officer's". I hope this help to clarify what I was saying in my previous comment and will be looking forward to more games made by you in the future.

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I see. Yeah, that's my bad. I found another one - "Admit is Mason" - instead of "Admit it Mason". Thanks! See, that's how important feedback is. I might update the game, maybe add somethig new and fix the problem with the text. Cheers!