I'll give some feedback since I think this is a really cool concept!
Pros:
- Good art! I think it's from an asset pack but good use of it anyways
- I really like the mix of puzzle and parkour in the game!
- Nice leaderboard to show how much I beat you! (lol)
- Good level design to encourage creative thinking (aside from that one hyper shortcut)
- Very intuitive
Cons:
- Not enough content! There's only one level and a few game mechanics so it gets boring quick
- Too much randomness in the beginning, as your spawn location can dictate your score massively. Maybe remove the random spawn position altogether
- You cant see enough of the map at once and there's no way to analyze the map mid-game
- There's not enough polish, as in there's no sound effects and no particles whatsoever
For changes, I would suggest:
1) a few more levels
2) longer levels
3) A fixed spawn location
4) Some kind of feature to look at the map entirely
5) For level design, make it so that the routes on the sides of the map are quicker so that the player has to decide if they should move to the side or not
6) More game mechanics since its kinda stale
7) Polish, polish, polish
Also, personal peeve, but I don't think the music fits the game