bruh 5 dollars? not funny
like im a player and i say i dont like it, and its looks like 1000 other text porn game on this site, is ordinary not rare, and its your frist game, and its not done yet, all demo should be free, from what I understand there is not even a single image of any character, it's like reading books and that's a minus for me [I'd rather just buy telenovela book with erotic elements, and not sit in front of the screen, tire my eyes and waste electricity]
your maximum is to make a map in 2d with some fucking blocks, I remember such text porn games where only a few selected options that the game gave us were clicked, and there was not even a minimap like you have, and these games were better, because they were from proven creators who They already had a few games behind them and they were not only text porn games. the game has no shocking content like gays, lesbians, trans, gore, bdsm, slaves, you only have a normal fight between female- monsters with an unbending male protagonist (BORING). if you wanted to make text pron game, you could put some symbolic graphics like in this game: https://rahimew.itch.io/bdcc . if your game is to have dialogues like this description for the game, I would not even download it for free,
i saw the games could have 20,000 words but have an interesting description encouraging you to buy ... wait those games is free. from your miserable description I can read an old hackneyed story, written by some teenager who had just discovered pornography. not even mentioning any additional forums about the game like github or discord, the whole thing looks very poor. And i think my comment on your game has more content than your entire game
oh and for end apologies if you don't think the constructive criticism is not worth your time