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Very well done! I thoroughly enjoyed the experience. The music, sfx, characters, and story all work so well together. I liked the look of the characters and their varied expressions. Great work!

  • Thinks I liked:
    • The pixel art is very cute!
    • The conversations flow pretty well.
    • That twist was out of this world lol.
    • The music and sfx are great.
  • Things that could be improved:
    • I would be nice for first time players to see the controls in game like "click to continue" inside text boxes or "click items to investigate them" when you are presented with the environment for the first time.
    • It seems like you can click down the mouse button and drag the mouse to rapidly select things in the scene. May be a bug.
    • You can click outside of the environment view and a white square still shows up as if you have the option of clicking in the black areas. May be a bug.
    • Honestly i feel like you could catch flies easier with a plastic bag than a can lol. But i guess the bag has no lid so u would need to tie it once you caught the flies.
    • When abel promises you the plushie and you head back to the car, if you click the plushie it replays the old dialogue where abel will not sell you the plushie. Only when you click the car is the plot moved forward.
    • The options screen has "always dash" and "command remember" but I am unfamiliar with those kinds of settings. Maybe add a description somewhere or mouseover text?
    • How do you leave the options screen? There is no back button? When i hit escape it just presents me with a "security error".
    • It looks like the player has HP and MP but they don't seem to be used. Is that right?
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Ohhh, thanks a lot for your detailed (and very helpful) review!! I'm glad that you overall liked my game :3

Most of the bugs you mentioned are p much "features" from the engine I used ;3 Tbh it's not made to play Point&Click Games on it, so there are some things that are not v optimal^^"

Also thx for reminding me to put controls in the game! That'd be really helpful for the player :oc 

Using the plastic bag..... would really be way easier.... TTvTT Def sth that went over my head hahaha
Let's just say it has some holes or sth lmao

The thing with the old dialog by the frog plushie was an oversight by me! Thx for telling me!
The options are irrelevant for you! If I had more time , I'd prob just try and take them off the menu. (They're just standard RPG Maker settings) The same goes for HP/MP. I'd have to go into the script to remove them from the menu (and I usually do that, but I didn't have enough time TvT)

The security error is news to be though :oc Pressing Esc (or the X-key iirc) should take you back. This is the first time I've heard of this, so I'll try to look into it!