I will have to say that for all of the VNs that I have watched, this one is by far the best one. The storyline is crisp and the characters are very relatable to the MC and the dialogue is fantastic. There are a few spelling errors in some of the dialogue, but nothing that a review wouldn't fix. I will say that I love the drop ins from other shows/movies such as "Serenity" and others. I laughed when I caught those Easter eggs and just smiled and said to myself, "Oh, they took that one from....". All in all, this is a very well put together novel and I am looking forward to your next "Chapter" of this fantastic event. Keep up the fantastic work. Keep us posted on the new development.
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Thank you very much!!
If you spot an error, please do point it out as the editor and I have gone over the dialogue (we're human after all) and some things slip past us.
I do enjoy working lines from movies, tv shows and music in to the story!!
There are DevLog updates here, twitter, discord and Patreon every Monday. This coming Monday will be 6 weeks working on chapter 11.