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I thought EP 10 came out in May? At least that's the timestamp on my files from May.

I purchased the game back in March of this year. I would like to get a key for Steam. Thanks

That's okay. I don't need to join Patreon. I paid for this on Steam already and I'm not going to pay more every month until it's released. I already have one AVN I'm doing that with and I'm about to stop that, because the Dev said that they would issue updates within 6 weeks and now it's been almost 3 months, but I'm not paying $15 for a game and then $10 more every month just to find out that the game isn't coming out for another 6 months to a year or longer. That is just taking advantage of people. So, No Thank you.

And your last update was almost a year ago. I understand taking your time, but this is too long. Just sayin'.

Where does the MC find the key to his "cage"? I have been having this character do nothing but work and rest. I bought a phone and the dildo, but haven't been able to do much else. I can't seem to travel anywhere else except the apartment and the night club. Thanks

Great job! Loved the story and graphics. Purchased it on Steam and absolutely fell in love with everything. Can't wait to see what your next project is going to be. Keep up the fantastic work. I'll be following.

Looking forward to your new content. Love the latest release by the way. Keep up the excellent work. 

That's not true, because on itch and Steam, there is also Grandma's House,  Bad Memories, Sisterly Lust and Young Again and they either have incest patching or they have it in the storyline without the need of patching on Steam or itch, so that reason doesn't really fly. It's more likely a  choice of the developer and not the site.  I have in the past, just found the file that has the "Landlady" or "Landlord" relations and simply modified them with the correct terms of identifying the characters and ran it accordingly. Just sayin'.

Totally understand about the day job. I just retired 2.5 years ago and just recently found these visual novels and can say that I really enjoy them for the imaging and stories that I have had the pleasure of reading. I appreciate the fast response and look forward to your next update. Thank you. - M

Just curious...Are updates coming every 3 months? Just would like to know about when to expect an update. Very anxious to see the next chapter. I wish the updates would be longer, but I know that would mean a longer period to wait for a new release. I just hate that the chapters seem kind of short and wish they would last a bit longer, but oh, well. Love the novel and can't wait for more. Kudos to you and your team for a great VN. 

When is the next update coming? Seems like it's been a while since an update was released.

From an old save, probably. I'll try from a completely new beginning. Anyway, check out the files I sent back to you via Discord and let me know how they look. Thanks.

Also updated some of the files and sent them via Discord

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:

SyntaxError: invalid syntax (game/script/script_private_club-rev2.rpy, line 2093)

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:

  File "script/script_private_club-rev2.rpyc", line 2092, in script

  File "E:\LifeofDesmond-0.8.9-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 1903, in execute

    choice = renpy.exports.menu(choices, self.set, args, kwargs, item_arguments)

  File "E:\LifeofDesmond-0.8.9-pc\renpy\exports.py", line 976, in menu

    condition = renpy.python.py_eval(condition)

  File "E:\LifeofDesmond-0.8.9-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1078, in py_eval

    code = py_compile(code, 'eval')

  File "E:\LifeofDesmond-0.8.9-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1015, in py_compile

    raise e

  File "E:\LifeofDesmond-0.8.9-pc\renpy\python.py", line 967, in py_compile

    raise orig_e

  File "E:\LifeofDesmond-0.8.9-pc\renpy\python.py", line 960, in py_compile

    tree = compile(source, filename, py_mode, ast.PyCF_ONLY_AST | flags, 1)

SyntaxError: invalid syntax (game/script/script_private_club-rev2.rpy, line 2093)

Windows-10-10.0.19045 AMD64

Ren'Py 8.0.1.22070801

Life of... 0.8.9

Fri Dec  9 20:10:02 2022

Good update for V0.22. Love that things are progressing in the story, but I'm really looking forward to a hookup with Amy and/or Nana soon or at least another scene with Minnie or her granddaughter or the neighbor. Haven't seen anything lately with redhead family of women. Guess a lengthy update will be needed at some point to play catch up with all of the women that the MC hasn't caught up with in a while. We haven't seen Mama Mabell or the nun or a few of the other side slices in a while, so yeah, a large update with the MC catching up with previous side women will definitely be needed. Just sayin'.

Any news on when a new release is coming out? Thanks

Any news on a new release or update? Been a while. Just curious

Any news on a new release? Been a while since 13.2 came out. Just curious.

Ok, I'll have to admit, that was a funny release (V0.20). I'm beginning to really appreciate the humor of the relationship between MC and Aunt Amy. She can't seem to win for losing. At the beach was very funny and well written dialogue. I really did hope they were going to finally get busy, but alas, that didn't happen. Guess I'll have to wait for the next release to come out and hope that the MC gets somewhere with her. At least he was able to move on the teacher a bit. That was some progress. Keep 'em coming. Great work and looking forward to the next release. - 

Keep 'em coming! This story just keeps getting better & better with each release (pardon the pun). I am hoping the MC finally gets busy with Amy while in France and then comes home to a party with Liz & Cat or for that matter Nana. All roads are leading up to it, but wish there were a way for the MC to be able to go back and revisit fun with some of the other characters. I haven't seen much in the way of Natalia, Aiko or the nun, so hoping that you guys make a release where that's a possibility. Just sayin'. Definitely looking forward to the next update. 

Agreed!

I have discord - ID Replacedtxn#1955

Badvador,

I went until the very end of the current version and there are a huge amount of spelling errors and a lot of the dialogue doesn't make sense with its current structure, so I would be very willing to help correct your dialogue for the VN and get it right back to you ASAP. Just let me know if you'd like the assist or not. Have a great day. 

Regards,

Mzel

I agree, CB. I just started the game and have found multiple instances of incorrect spelling. I would be happy to read your dialogue content and make the necessary corrections and send it back to you for implementation into the game. My mind already adjusts the misspelled words so I read them correctly, but some sentence construction is making no sense, hence why I would willingly proofread your story for you.

Just sayin'.

Well, I must be at the end of .20, because when I click on the girls to do something, it only comes up with WIP. So, guess I'll have to wait for ver .21 to come out next

And what is the price for each episode after that? Another $10? Then another? I'm curious as to how this works, because I have the same thing on Steam right now, with College Kings, where each chapter/episode/update/DLC or whatever is always more money to get to the next whatever.... By the time this thing would be completed, a user would have paid hundreds into the "game". Just sayin'.

I can't think of any VN "game" worth me spending that kind of money on.

Well, looking back on your Dev Log, it looked like you were putting out an update about every 3 to 4 months. Just curious when the next update will be released. Any thoughts? Thanks.

I love this story and the work on it, but I have discovered that for a lot of adult VNs that have the taboo motif (scenarios/storyline) that it takes what seems like FOREVER to finally see the MC have sex with a family member.  I see this when we are on now Chapter 11 of this VN. I don't mean that the storytellers should rush into it in chapter 1, but REALLY?, eleven chapters in and the most that the MC has done is cop a feel and gotten a kiss?   

It's funny, I only bring this up because the MC has had sex with a cop, an Aunt's co-worker, a store clerk and hotel manager but not those he's supposed to have sex with. I understand the buildup, but come on, by now he should of at least hooked up with one of the cousins or the aunt. Just sayin'.

Don't get me wrong, I loved the story and artwork, but I don't get the dragging out the anticipation. Just my opinion.

Hopefully, we'll see the MC connect with the others sooner rather than later. Just being observant and want to see the story progress a little quicker and not drag out so much.

Otherwise, as always, great work in storytelling and artwork. Looking forward to more chapters in the future.

I love this story and the work on it, but I have discovered that for a lot of adult VNs that have the taboo motif (scenarios/storyline) that it takes what seems like FOREVER to finally see the MC have sex with a family member.  I see this when we are on now Chapter 11 of this VN. I don't mean that the storytellers should rush into it in chapter 1, but REALLY?, eleven chapters in and NOW we finally have sex with one of the aunts. 

It's funny, I only bring this up because the MC has had sex with everyone else in the town except those he's supposed to have sex with. I understand the buildup, but come on.

Don't get me wrong, I loved the scene with Liz and it was great that it lasted as long as it did, but I feel that it could have happened back in Chapter 9 or even 10 when he was giving her the massage, or that an opportunity has presented itself to the MC with the titular character on more than one occasion.

Hopefully, we'll see the MC connect with others sooner rather than later. Just being observant and want to see the story progress a little quicker and not drag out so much.

Otherwise, as always, great work in storytelling and artwork. Looking forward to more chapters in the future.

Looking for laptop code in escape room. TIA

Yeah, being a practicing idiot, I forgot to install the taboo patch and wasn't until I did that the landlady and others went away. Sorry about that and you're right about his manhood; what does it really matter? You put out some great product and I'm happy with it otherwise. Keep on going. Thanks again.

Well, I must say that the latest update was good. However, the Landlady, tenant identifiers were offputting. I guess these are the default identifiers in the programming and must have been missed by the story editors. I would suggest going back and re-identifying the characters as they are, i.e., Aunt, Cousin, Nana...etc. It would throw the readers off by misidentifying when your first eight chapters were listing them by their respective pronouns. Otherwise, it is a very good update. Was hoping for a little more interaction with the cousin and aunt (Katie/Liz) or even with Amelia, but guess that will come soon enough. Keep going. Good work and just a few minor critiques.

I would also add that reducing the size of the MC's manhood would make the visual a little more believable. As it stands, there are some scenes where it would be very difficult to believe that a female character could actually deepthroat the MC without busting her neck open like a wet paper tube. Just sayin'.

Roger that. Thanks for the update.

I'm curious. When I get these notifications of Updates, do I need to go back and re-download the VN to get these new images/animations or do I wait for a new Chapter to come out. Kind of confusing to me as I'm new to VNs on itch.io. Thanks