Just made my let’s play on your game as a regular player (so it’s without voice comments). I hope it will be useful for you to see how fresh players might start your game for the first time :) I’ll provide text comments later, probably after finishing the videos for the other projects :)

The art is fantastic and the mood of the game is just right!

The UI and progression felt a little clunky. I wanted to read the text faster, but didn't want to have to skip it (by pressing control). I wish that the text boxes could be fully filled instantly.

Also, the input for the Last One game felt a bit clunky. I have to click on the token, and then navigate on the number picker, go to the number I want, and then press return. That's a lot of inputs for a simple action. The game will flow better with a one-click input format which will make everything feel more fluid and natural.

Sound and music are great and perfectly integrated.

The writing is a little bit plain and a little bit verbose. If it were spiced up a bit, or tightened for more conciseness I think it would feel even more engaging.

Very nice game demo overall!

Very cool novel with puzzles.