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i have some feedback for you, i am loving the V.N. and the story line and CGI are A++ but I found a large *( CONTINUITY ERROR )* in the pool seen, i don't normaly like to pick flys, but i have it the story in medievil time but yet there is a ultra modern swimming pool with waterproof LED lighting all around !!! i guess when creating that scene there was no old world pools and for me personal the mixture of old and new broke the reading flow for me, i may have a fix for it and it a simple one and that is reuse the scene where the queen is in the bath at the begin of the story just make it deeper and widerand clearer water as in the picture to the right hand side.


"Reuse the scene where the queen is in the bath at the begin of the story"

Sadly, that was the first thing I tried.  The way that set is built, I couldn't make the bath bigger without making the floor and everything connected to it larger as well.  There just wasn't a good way of making it work. 

I'm just writing off the pool lights as some kind of luminescent crystals and the wall lights are just fancy fixtures overtop candle holders.

yep that could work or wooden torches at 45 degrees off the wall would work like that and if possible add a filter that makes it look old, dust and destressed would make it stand out i can't wait to see where this tweak goes. cheers