You may want to add a conditioned statement. In my game I've avoided doing anything in the cafe (exhibitionism) but Hazel says I've seen what you do here your nothing but a pervert. 
I hadn't done any of the other quest lines...lol I did the minimum needed to get Autumn to that location, sides from what I've seen of the Hazel character she would have only judged if she saw things like kissing or touching, unless I misunderstood her character and she's really completely judgemental.