Five bucks is more than fair as a price for The Winged Ones. Even before the current proofreading and without achievements it's one of my favorite otome games ever made. Honestly, it would even be worth more, but I understand it would be weird to charge more as people will still be able to play it for free if they take it here.
Anyway, congrats in the huuuge word count you've managed to write! I'm really excited for that final fight. The ones in the previous game almost made my heart stop - well, at least on Reksa's and Rama's routes, so I can't even imagine what awaits us in Bermuda XD
On a side note, it's so funny - Guntur was the character who directly caught my eye when you first talked about this game. And well, I love him a lot from what I've seen so far. In the meantime, Kah'lil was the only one who didn't really attract me that much. I think I've said that already when I've first played the demo, or something like that. But then, after playing more times, selecting different answers and honestly simply letting time do it's thing, I'm seriously starting to wonder if I don't like him even more than Guntur now. This is so weird haha. Can't tell who'll be my favorite at the end of the day, when I'll play the full version, but it's funny how without new content my ranking still changed somehow.