NICESU NICESU, CAESAR CHAN~~~
Hahaha, but seriously tho, that was pretty awesome. The story you've got going here is top-notch. I'm thrilled to see there are more episodes, so I can find out what happens next!
More specifically, I love the lore, I was always excited to learn more about the demons and the Vestigials. The pacing was great; I never felt bored, or that I wanted to skip forward.
The characters were nice, too! Mike was cute (tho she'd bop me on the head if I told her that) and I really wanna know what Gerald's deal is. I feel sorry that all the memories were wiped out, though :( At least they live happily ever after! The writing was great, very fun to read! I loved the dialogue.
I see you've been improving with the art too; I see you have older and newer games, and I can see the progress. But I'm not one to drag a rock, so it didn't bother me much.
All in all, an excellent game! Good work!