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Greatest has been seen. You have built an interesting story and crafted a beautiful world in this VN. I have to say, I finally catch up to the current version, and it is a world of wonders. You have brought a world that is alive, and characters well known to stick in and out. But, there are a few things that I would like to point out. You can take it as a critical, nothing personal with some stuff I will say just preferences.

*Although I see that you put great effort in the illustration of your characters, it sometimes they feel out of place. They seem a bit too realistic, but it has its own charm to it.

*You did a splendid job to bring out creativity needed to get hooked. But sometimes it feels that there’s more information needed.

*You have chosen great areas of music bringing a brim of light and setting the tone for the scenes so far… But some of them feel out of place.

I haven’t been in the Simulacrum, so there is still more to explore for me, but so far it has been a wonderful adventure, sometimes even touching the hearth with warm embrace, but others feel flaw. I cannot remember where but knowing you have done great so far I wish you a good luck for the future. And I will be waiting eagerly for your next update.

Currently, it took me almost 20 hours of reading, and I did enjoy every part of your story.

Quick edit: Is there a way to reset the simulacrum?

After seeing the simulacrum: My! Ye done a good one there, sir. Separating the lust from the main story is alright, it keeps everything important to get to know your characters. But, I feel that these could be incorporated into the main storyline, not immediately but maybe after everything has been solved? Trying to see the picture of ¨those insights¨… are well described. You have a ¨clear vision¨ thank you for the insight.

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Thanks for the kind words and feedback!

If you mean the intro to the simulacrum, there's no way to reset that outside of deleting persistent save files. If you really want to read it again, you can open the Pervader/game/script/simulacrum.rpy file with any text editor.

The two simulacrum stories we have right now are very unlikely to ever be incorporated into the main game. They just wouldn't work with the story I wish to tell.

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Again you have done a splendid job, I enjoyed the story so far and the cliffhanger that I got really settle well. Sometimes other devs live Cliffhangers that makes people desperate to see what’s next. A good thing, but it gets problematic when we are left somewhat unsatisfied. Anyway…

I asked because I wanted to change the Protagonist name, since I grew custom to the one that I started in the story. I started the simulacrum when I downloaded the game thinking it was the story, but I notice that the start of it was out of place.

But, I have to thank you again for doing an incredible VN, since it did run wild in imagination. Any of the scenes started to become vivid dreams like people dosing of looking at a sunset or just drifting away. I could see the character becoming alive as if it was an animated story. Something that is hard to get as far as I know.

Oh yeah, you can't change the name of the protagonist in the Simulacrum. That's intended, though I guess I might change it in the future.