This was shorter than I expected, hoped for a bit longer starting quest to show off the planned gameplay a bit more, but it certainly has the potential to be a very fun game. The presentation in particular is very nice, especially the tilesets and the omelette. :) The character busts are nice, but could use some more work. The female PC in particular has some white dots on her left cheek and mouth that I think are supposed to be reflected light or something, but it looks a bit weird as is. Other than that, no complaints.
Also, I didn't expect voice acting, but it was pretty good. There were times when the voice lines said something different from the text, but I expect that will be fixed once the lines are finalized.
Great work :)