Thanks for the review! For the grammar I'm sorry, the translator doesn't see the bunnies in the feminine and always puts them in the masculine. As soon as I have time I'll look over everything.
Just bunny girls being reffered to as "he" is a bit of a bonner-killer for me... Now to each their own, i don't judge.
Plus rabbit/bunny is indeed a masculine noun in most language. But female rabbits would still be a "she"... all the more if it's technically a bunny-girl