Welp, I died a lot! I think a back button would be really nice. Although, you can save, it's kind of a staple for the visual novel type games. So consider that in the future. Upon restart, I rushed through choices because I wanted to get back but the audio from every decision stacked, making for cacophony. So, fade-in/fade-out would be awesome for audio clips and is pretty dang easy to achieve!
Couple of weird things grammar wise but very understandable!
Overall, well done, music centric and a good story =D Great work!