Hello! Thank you so much for your interest in the story and for your feedback!
If you think that their relationship was rushed, I'm very much open to adding more interactions between Sol and Luna! But adding more scenes between them is something that I'll work on last, probably, since there are other more pressing matters that need to be changed.
And I'm definitely going to do something with the time skips (maybe adding something like "Later that day"), and I'll see what I can do so that scenes don't end abruptly.
As for endings, I already have some plans to change them somewhat: expand on them and make them more of "show don't tell", plus I want to add one small scene with the spouse. If you have something else to add to that, I'll be happy to read about it!