I definitely found myself sucked into this game, and it's one I would like to come back to when it's finished. A lot of care was put into the UI, and the story was very well written. I think I'm having a hard time understanding how it ties back to the theme of the jam (how do you decide when a cliffhanger was intentional or just accidental?) and to a certain extent it's going to be impossible to judge 25% of a game. But I think the foundation here is excellent.