I like the use of crows, not only is THE CROW WITCH an awesome name, but the Nattramnen is just so cool and her special power blackout the sky is freaking great. So visual it's amazing.
You've done a lot with very little space and I could easily see this fleshed out into a 20-40 page zine with space for the text to breathe and the different factions, rumours and buildings to flourish. I also would love to feel more of the mummy, as the short description for me personally leaves an Egyptian-vibe which conflicts a little bit with the crows and the witch.
It's a little off the vibe of the jam, but it's still killer work. I still cannot fathom how much work you cranked out.