"Why the MC is trying to avoid them is unclear to me, though" - well, obviously, 'cause that ends his jorney, and that's what I suggest should be changed)
Uh... either one or both of us is misunderstanding the basic premise of the game. Pretty sure he's not supposed to be on a journey.
EDIT: Oh, you're the same person who commented similarly on GameOver. Yeah, you're totally missing the point.
