My Biggest Complaint, besides the grammar, is the lack of choices.
Like, I'd love to talk to, and possibly even befriend the dragon. But I have an odd obsession with dragons.
I mean other than that I don't really have a problem with it, it is just a simple TBA, so yeah, not much needs improving, perhaps adding a backtrack for atmosphere, but the player can just run appropriate music themselves. I mean It works well, no bugs.
Maybe adding some more detail?