First of all, you wrote a book and if I tried to read it all, I think it would take me 6 to 8 hours. There are some choices that are not really choices but more like "what do you want to do with your night first?", potentially you could have added a way to select one and skip the rest, or do all 3 if you please.
Now secondly, the book is VERY HIGH QUALITY. It is excellent world building, I was quite invested in the lives of Padre, my gangrel sister and whatever coterie I got left with.
If you are not given a win, I would consider seeing if you could pitch the whole thing as an actual book to Paradox, considering that they did release Vampire The Masquerade Novels before.