Okay an hour later and I've finished reading everything thus far I love the story already stinking love Charles with my soul
{SPOILERS TO THE STORY}
Personally was hit hard when the news of losing your ghost came up and felt horrible for the player character like give em some hugs and support (thanks to Archie for doing so) I was also hit hard by the player character suddenly thinking they where not real and they'll be forever alone that made me have a small reality check to remember i'm real, fine and safe which are my fault since I relate to most of what the player character has to endure so far but enough of that I can't wait for the next update to see what happens next thanks so much author for blessing us with this story
oh dayum took me ten minutes to write this so my last comment was two hours ago also sorry for the paragraph I don't write a lot of comments but when I do it's because of excitement and passion for the game :}