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Speak for yourself. i find it  Fine as it is.
The main purpose of such a story is  to entertain the Reader so they get enjoyment out of the experience. And i dare say that the Wholesomenis IS what draws most readers into this world. 

And since most of the advices come from parents that give them to friends of ther sons, i find that part fitting as well.

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Nah he's got a point. The wholesome speeches were kinda my way to establish the parental figures as supportive pillars to the main characters, but lately I kinda inadvertently spread it to a lot of the other characters as well. I'll keep an eye on this in future updates ;w;/ 

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Alright then. keep up the good work then.
Just for the Records, i loved all the characters so far :)

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after reading a different VN that really twists the knife in I could use some more of your character's wholesome speeches though! X3

Great work thank you for sharing!