Well I hope they are better. But I'm not a very good judge, since I made them. Like my children, they are prefect in every way !!
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LOL... Too bad you broke out of character there... This was funny, and starting to look a bit like one of those bad TV-shop commercial scripts! ;-D
But seriously, I am looking forward to the next installment! :-)
PS: I might be a bad dad, but I won't say my kids are perfect... *UGH!* Especially my 22yo daughter is such a headache at the moment! We're happy when she goes to stay with her girlfriend for a few days each week! (Don't get me wrong, I think she's pretty and that her mom and I made a gorgeous young woman, but I think I'd prefer a yandere character over how she is!)