I’m stuck on a phone right now so can’t play a lot of this, but what I went through was nicely atmospheric. I noticed some wordchoice errors (for example, you nock an arrow instead of knock, and you take a breath, not a breathe) but these are very minor.

Ah!, I see why this game received so few votes. The screen configuration does that the pictures occupy the whole screen in laptop configurations.

That is... most modern laptops have a little screen with high resolution, so they are capable of showing 1920x1080 pixels, but the content at full resolution will be displayed too small for comfortable human reading. So, these laptops are configured to show the screen at 150% of zoom. That makes your game physically impossible to play for lower resolutions or some modern laptops.

Even in a proper external monitor, it is not comfortable, because most text happens in the below section of the game, while the upper side, where most reading happens is occupied by the title screen.

Corollary, please, remove that title screen, or do that it disappears after a Press any key to continue.

I mean, Quest should allow a more optional configuration for your title screen.

Thanks!