Thank you very much. tiny poems is a great idea, you are really good with stories. The poem is not mine and I avoid having dialogs and text in my games because I'm not an english native speaker and writing is hard for me because of grammar, so having more text would have made the game worst not better.
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Thank you! Part of the story of mine game was written by my brother Noah actually.
I feel you though - i'm not a native speaker myself and was pretty anxious to release a game with that much (serious) story text. I went over it for typos a lot of times and i'm quite sure i have more than one grammar mistake in there too haha.
That said, i hope you don't mind if I disagree - I think more text could have been a nice addition to the game and we all non native english speakers shouldn't care that much about grammar and spelling in this context - i rather expect native speakers to get that not everybody speaks english and that everybody should be tolerant about those things.
I at least - would not have minded a few grammar or typo mistakes if I get a got story anyway. :D