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Short first build but very interesting so far, I like the somber start of the game really pulls me into the story. One thing though each time Torent expression changes he disappear then reappear, I don't know much about Renpy but I'm sure tweaking that wouldn't be very difficult, also the name of the game is kinda weird, To THE lonely A home isn't exactly grammar correct but if it's intentional then I don't really care.

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Yass I did something right XD

Also I fixed the Fading in and out issue, (I just misplaced the lines)

And the title is actually "To the lonely, a home" It's more like a declaration rather than a title so it will be oddly toned to most people when they hear it for the first time, but as the game progresses it should shed some light into that later on :3

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"To the lonely a home" is perfectly grammatically correct, and not a single one of your sentences in this post is grammatically correct.

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English is my second language, so I'm sorry? I just thought the title sounds a bit weird