I'm kinda frustrated that Byte didn't try to scan the Demon's arm again, like it's right there just do it.
Overall great game.
I just played through the game and I have to say wow, this is one of the most unique furry visual novels to come out in a while. The art is great, I really like your use of color it really makes the characters pop out in contrast to the background. The story is very interesting, I have to say the pacing did feel a bit rushed but that's understandable considering you had to cut a good chunk of the story due to the workload. The music is really nice, the heavily auto-tuned voice that plays during the main menu is a nice touch.
I notice that you used some Vietnamese words, like Dawn's last name is Sun Bears in Vietnamese and some other names sound viet to me, nothing noteworthy I just thought it's kinda cool as Vietnamese myself.
I really like the new prologue, it really shows us that Kobu genuinely cares about being a good Demon King and tries really hard but still struggles with it which leads to inevitable burn out, instead of the old version he just seems like a spoiled brat that didn't care about anything other than himself.
Most of the changes were perfect, although I have to ask why did you cut out the beginning when Kobu was little, did it not fit with the story or was it just moved to later in the story.
Short first build but very interesting so far, I like the somber start of the game really pulls me into the story. One thing though each time Torent expression changes he disappear then reappear, I don't know much about Renpy but I'm sure tweaking that wouldn't be very difficult, also the name of the game is kinda weird, To THE lonely A home isn't exactly grammar correct but if it's intentional then I don't really care.