Simple and good game but a lot of texts! Keeping it precise for Game Jam should be the priority.
ah! but it's mostly a text-based game... if there were less text there'd be no game fjkdfjkhjdk
but thank you!
As you are submitting for a jam, keeping tons of text would make people lose their patience and they won't rate you that properly. So consider keeping text precise, clear and to the point next time for better retention.