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Hey Legion, here's my PitchYaPitch tweet and my linktree.

https://twitter.com/NoisyHeadGames/status/1451548905091518474

https://linktr.ee/NoisyHeadGames

I've included the demo that I released this week too, very lucky timing :D

Would love feedback on the pitch as well the game itself! Always looking for ways to improve :) thanks!

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Looks great! Maybe use an emoji or two when you do the PYG pitch

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Good shout, they definitely help put a bit of colour and personality   into a tweet :) thanks!

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Hey Noisy, overall a really nice pitch! The text explains what it is, and your video backs you up. An emoji here and there will help add color and break up the text. I like how you've integrated the hastags into the text too. In terms of the video, your first 6 seconds are dedicated to branding which also happens to be the time you have to grab someone's attention -- I would skip that and get straight into the meat of the video. Music is great too!

Thanks for the feedback BoF1ll! That's a good shout as well - I might look at snipping off the very first bit then for Pitch Ya Game then :) cheers!