This game is short but really sweet <3 The characters were adorable and it was nice to see how they had both strengths and weaknesses, even the MC. ??? was my absolute favorite, he was super sweet and I wanted to give him a big, BIG hug ❣╰(⸝⸝⸝´꒳`⸝⸝⸝)╯❣ His route was the one I could connect with the most; the scene with the MC telling ??? about something their father told them in the past ("You are your own person before you are someone's child") was very touching and warmed my heart. It hit close to home in a way because I used to compare myself with my Dad and put myself down. I also personally loved the MC's chemistry with ??? the best and ???'s friendship with Will made me smile. The art was also very pretty, I loved the different expressions the characters had (???'s and Will's especially <3) and it was nice for the romance-able characters to get an extra outfit. The music was fitting and I liked the details of the sound effects since they helped you immerse yourself better in the story (≧∇≦)/
I hope you don't mind a little critique though: I sometimes felt like the transitions and music changed too abruptly and this made reading a bit distracting at certain points. Then, as regards the black sprites, I think they looked a bit unbalanced (I remember Jordan's sprite in particular was kinda big) in comparison to the main sprites which were beautifully drawn.
Overall, I really liked the game and look forward to more games from you!! <3 Good luck, I'm rooting for you!! (*•̀ᴗ•́*)و
PS: I wish Will had a route too, he was very charming (●ฅ́дฅ̀●) But, of course, I understand it's not in your plans xD hehe.