A great story, lovely music, fun visuals, and a simple and fun gameplay. I really like the idea, and I did have fun playing this. Perhaps a bit short, but this is really not an issue for jam game. The voice acting was really good, but I believe the recordings could have used a bit more compression, because it now sounds a bit flat and perhaps the volume is a bit low. But this again not a big issue. And overall is this a good and interesting jam game. Very well done.
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Thanks very much! Neither of us are well versed in audio so apologies for the lack of compression. Re: game length, we’ve kept it to one branch/3 mini games just to give the game a “demo” feel and stay within scope for what our two person team could manage! We feel we’ve managed to showcase the concept and mechanics well with a decent level of polish, given the time constraints. Glad you enjoyed it!