I am glad you liked it! Feel free to drop any typos in comments if you come across them. Or you can wait for further updates, I will catch them the next time I read through the segments
The last sentence has one "rather" too much. Those are the typos that i can recall at the top of my head. there have been a few more but don't remember where exactly they were.
Think it should say "through his tears" at the start of the 2nd paragraph.
