Think it should say "through his tears" at the start of the 2nd paragraph.
line 3: "then she looks"
Do you really mean "arc-wizard" or did you want to say "arch-wizard"?
The last sentence has one "rather" too much. Those are the typos that i can recall at the top of my head. there have been a few more but don't remember where exactly they were.
Thanks for posting them! I will have them corrected in the update next week
Drat, the though one always sneaks in. A file search revealed about 20 more of them. My shame is all-consuming :P
Think it should say "through his tears" at the start of the 2nd paragraph.
