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I enjoyed this demo a lot!!

Not only was the duo incredibly funny together, but seem to be very interesting charas on their own :D

The dialog overall was written very well and I loved how it would sometimes forward itself - that added to its comedic timing very well xD Also, the way important text was given a different color was a nice detail!

Also, the worldbuilding (or at least the hints that were given in this demo) is suuuuper intriguing!! Magic, different worlds, whatever Mr. assistant is... so many interesting things :D

As for the gameplay, I really loved the Discussion time!! (even if I'm an idiot who never got the right choice first x'D I hope there'll be an easy way to replenish the TP in the full game haha) It totally fits with the mystery/detective theme of the game and really made me think about how someone could kill the victim!! I also liked the red herring that was given in the investigation. That did throw me off-guard a little bit xD

I was a bit disappointed though, that the investigation itself was mostly on one spot (aka the body)... I personally would have liked it if the player could look for more clues on the map >-< (Well, on the other hand, a bathroom stall is also pretty small x'D)

I was super surprised when the demo ended though!! Just as I was preparing myself to investigate them!!!!
So that's why I hope that this game will be completed one day! I really wanna see more of these charas and figure out who the killer is! UvU

Thank you so much for the full-length review!! ;; I'll write a full-length reply!

I'm happy to hear that you enjoyed it!

The writing was honestly one of my biggest dev block ^^" Writing the murder case was hard, but it was harder writing the characters' chemistry ;; so I'm glad it conveyed well!

Glad you like the worldbuilding too! The playtesters were my friends that are already aware of the universe, so I was afraid it was too ambigous or confusing for new players ;;

I hope the discussion wasn't too difficult! Nobody so far has got through it without losing any TP, so don't worry! Good job for making it through XD

Thanks a lot for the critique also! I do think the exploration/investigation bit is not that exciting. I'll try to somehow make it more fun if I finish this!

I hope you get the "ending" with the credits!

Your review really did make me wanna finish this game tho ;; I hope you'll keep on supporting me through the development if I do! ^^

You don't know how happy I am when people play this and give positive feedback on it,,, so once again, thank you so so very much!!! ;;