I really enjoyed the inclusion of sound, it really adds to the immersion. I also think the gameplay is an enjoyable conceit, with every loop adding more information, and sometimes more options. It's fun to solve the puzzle.
One thing I found weird was the (mild spoilers) "help man" > "punch woman" > "dash past" sequence. Once I've knocked her out and gotten past her, my only option is to go back and headbutt her and fail. I just didn't understand why I'd go back and do that, but maybe there's more behind it? I've never seen the "good ending", so.
There's a few typos here and there that took me out a bit. It's not a big deal! Especially in a gamejam. But generally, or if you want to update this at some point, running the text through spellcheck could help. Although I know that's hard in Inkscript. But as an example, "You see the ally across the street", ally has a different meaning than alley, so I was confused for a sec.