i think your visual novel was great love all the characters and I think it’s cool how your inspiration came from other known visual novels as well maybe one day we’ll be able to witnesss some “action” between Walter and one of the characters until then please keep up the great work and do your best at making the game best of luck to you
of course and don’t worry about having bad grammar that’s fine nobody’s perfect after all just focus on what important and reach your goal and if there’s any negative comments or anything don’t let them get to you just stay cam and focused and everything will turn out just great! I’m sure you can do it can’t wait to see when then next update will our way and who it’ll be for till then I’ll be waiting