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Heyy Ari! I just had to play Fleeting right as it came out, and this was such a lovely break from homework. This was such an amazing demo so I'll just dump my thoughts into the feedback questions <3

  1. What do you think about the main character, Masa?
    1. It's unusual to see a protagonist who seems more introverted/serious but also clearly has a violent streak. It makes him very interesting! It's refreshing for the story to be from his perspective
  2. Who's your favorite character so far and why? 
    1. Masa himself, haha. I just think he's the most compelling character and I relate to him the most.
  3. How's the pacing and writing?
    1. Soooo good!! I've played your other games and the mood and storytelling is so much more present in this game. I like how the scenes are broken up with the dream sequences, and makes the story easy to follow.
  4. How's the story and plot? What do you think will happen?
    1. I think the captain and Kai will be constantly fighting for the alien guy. Maybe the crew gets torn apart and Masa joins Kai's excaliber? Idk Masa and the LI's just seem like they're meant to be in a separate crew together.
  5. What aspects of the game do you like?
    1. The LI's are super flawed. Kai is a prickly dude through and through which was great lol. I think some games fall into the trap of trying to have every character be likable and sometimes do a 180 on a character's mean attitude because the players have to romance them. Even Jeri who's supposed to be the nice guy can be a push over sometimes...I like that!
  6. How is the UI?  What did you like about it? What did you not like about it? 
    1. Love it, the UI is really nice. The change in portraits and everything fits well with the game's aesthetic. The font is readable, animations are just right, and the side portraits for audio only conversations are cool. 
  7. What other improvements can I make to enhance your experience?
    1. This is nitpicky, but when the affection point goes up maybe there's like words that indicate who it's for? Like "Kai affection/friendship up" or something like that because I'm dumb and didn't realize if I made the right choice hahaha
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AAAHH~ sobs thank you, bb~ i'm so glad you enjoyed it!! i love characters like masa! i'm glad you can relate to him too! i was worried he'd be unrelatable c':  also, i really appreciate flawed characters! they seem more real to me, so i'm glad you dig that! i'm excited to show how their relationships will develop with masa! 

as for the affection points, i think that's a great idea! i'll incorporate it somewhere xDD

EEE~ thanks again for sharing your thoughts! i'm excited to continue working on this when i can! Cx