The art style is good but some of the text is incorrectly used and missing some letters. I still really enjoyed it though and am looking forward to the next update. When do you think that will be?
I've proofread the text a few times, but I swear a guy becomes dyslexic by reading the same thing time after time.
I'm trying to get the next chapter out by the end of September. This is the first time I'm doing such predictions, so I might end up being a bit off. But so far I think I'm on target for that.