I was expecting some twist or at least the monster design. I do really like the premise, overall, yet the lack of creepiness and horror was more disturbing and a bit dull.
The story was a bit dry and yeah, it needs some work. If this is your first horror game, it's good, still needs work thou.
Thanks for your feedback and yeah your right the story is a bit dry I did have more plans for it but I ended up loosing motivation for it. It is not my first horror game I did one before which was a FNAF fan game that you can download from Gamejolt. To be honest this game was more of playing around with stuff in the engine and random ideas I had, but I just suck at doing assets and ended up being an ambient horror.