Wow, love the addition of creating the office together. So fun to see what kind of weird office spaces we make, then have to live in them. And great use of the second page to "suggest" an office plan layout...
Just a small suggestion: for organization of the instructions, it seemed to kind of jump all over the place. Might want to organize a "Pre-Game" section for character creation, GM setup, etc., and then a "Playing" section for what the players & GM do during gameplay.
But regardless, a very fun Lasers & Feelings alternative for the people person's paper people!