Skip to main content

On Sale: GamesAssetsToolsTabletopComics
Indie game storeFree gamesFun gamesHorror games
Game developmentAssetsComics
SalesBundles
Jobs
TagsGame Engines

I found this game really interesting. I really loved the skill element of the game, to be able to really make your own character evolve during the story. The art style isn't to bad ether, I really like the comic book style.

The characters of the game is not to bad. My favorite girl so far is probably Emma, but I do hope for more characters to come.

There's probably just one thing I can think of that I didn't like, that being all the time skips. It's way to many and they're way to long.

But overall I really enjoy this game. You've earned yourself a follow from me and I'm really looking forward to upcoming chapters.

(+1)

I'm glad you enjoyed the game! And thanks for the feedback.

About the time skips. I wanted to make the story feel relatively grounded and realistic, even if there's still a lot of "porn logic" in game. That means that relationships take time to develop. But showing every single day of that time period would get boring really quickly in my opinion. So, to solve that problem, I had to either make the story happen in a much smaller time period, or make time jumps and let the relationships evolve a bit "off screen". 

I chose to follow Alfred Hitchcock's quote "drama is life with the dull bits cut out" and just showed the important moments for the story and skipped the rest, while informing the players of how much time have passed since the last scene to keep everyone on the same page.

Perhaps this wasn't the most elegant solution. As the story progresses and all relationships are well developed, this sort of "trick" won't be necessary anymore. So, you can expect less time jumps in the future.

(+1)

Appreciate that you explained why you did it, and after hearing why you did it I do think that you may have a point. 
Keep up the great work

Deleted 3 years ago