I have some brutally honest feedback this is meant to help not undermine you, i don't like the V.N. at all and here is why ! is love the use of high end CGI art work but then to add a mix of much lower end graphics with thick black lines even in the intro was the first point of o no please NO !!! and i think its because i work with graphics so must for books and merchandise and i know bring 2D and high end 3D is a art form that i very hard and i would say pick one or the other, i am sorry if this came across as hateful or negative but when i have got through close to 400 V.N.'s read in a year, things like trigger me so bad i just have to say something that will hopefully help long term.
I DON'T normally this but if you and to i am willing and give of my own time and talents to help to make this into a A++ V.N. just ask your not sure will it work or not, dose it look eye pleasing.