Hello, I now rated the game and I want to give you my feedback: As I try to respect the 10 day limit and the quality of game, it is a very nice game! The audio and the gameplay are nice, but, how @Gad already said, they are a few things, that could be better.
Theme Relevance: The theme of the collecting of parts of the soul, to rebirth is very good!
So I don't find anything bad about this section.
Artwork: The artwork is very well, especially the fact, that all is done in only 10 days!
So I love the artwork and the atmosphere, well done!
Audio: The background music is very nice and beautiful, so it's very good!
But I wished, that they are more sound effects like the ash - human transition. Like jump, collison (from jump), Sprint or speech sound effects by the dialogue.
I don't want say, that the game is bad! But in my opinion, it could have more sound effects.
Gameplay: The gameplay is nice and for 10 days, it is a very goo job!
Also the design of the game an the levels are nice!
I know, how it is to be under strees as a game developer and programmer, because I'm also a programmer and I also had lot of stress because the time.
So I don't to be very hard, but they are still few things, that could be better: The movement of the player is often struggling, so I often lose and it frustrated me a little bit, but it's ok.
The another thing is, that the collision don't work at few times, so it makes the game very hard.
So the game is in general a little bit hard, but it is not your fault, I know how the bugs are.
Maybe more checkpoints between the level self is a good balancing to currently work around the bugs.
I read, that you tried to make the game for the controller, so I can understand you.
The last thing is, that any time I leave the itch.io site or sometimes I click the right mousebutton, the game crash and I need to start from the beginning. I also found a bug in the first and second world, where you sometimes fall forever and you must restart the entire game too.
Like Gad said, the UI of the dialogue is to little by fullscreen and the dialoguetext is broken, if you spam the skip button (mouseclick).
But: For 10 days and for the resutls, you did a very good job!
Hopefully, you can understand my rating and I hope, that you will fix and improve your game after the voting period, so anyone have the same chances.
Good success!
Best regards
Mudy