Curiosity question, but do you ever go back to stuff that's been completed (saving Cassie from the Don or the fight to save the manor, for example) and tweak things a little? It's fine if you don't just was thinking it might be nice if you reviewed older stuff and cleaned it up a bit if you felt it needed it.
Having seen all the possible interactions that Bell can have when asked to steal a kiss, I will say that Bell is soooooooooo out of her element against the succubi and incubi! Are you intending to go back to "why are Bell's breasts like that??" at some point? It's fine if it's down the line of stuff that should be done, just I want to see who has it out for such a sweet, kind, and naive cowgirl!
The "which of the four will show up when you are working at Roxie's" (Happy, neutral, lousy, or NPC) seems a little off, there seems to be a lot of lousy tippers in a row on the latest version. Maybe it's just RNG has it out for me (wouldn't bet against that...) but when it's "lousy 6 times out of 8, and the other two weren't great either"...better off having LD show off her body stripping!