Freaking awesome art style and very witty narrative. I think you've got a knack for game building and would love to see your future work. No critiques from me, only a suggestion that future polishing on this include include more HUD or UI elements that could show enemy health, your accuracy stats, or something interesting to track. If that makes sense.
If you have a second to hop by 1-minute game this weekend, I'd love your critique and rating!