Of course the artistic style was spectacular. I especially liked the walking motions at the very end. Storyline I found intriguing as well, and would love to see more. Not much else I can give feedback on except the voices I found cute at first, but grating after. Eventing could use a little improvement, though that I could definitely chalk up to the time crunch and power outage.
Working in teams is hard! Hope you all can make something awesome happen post-jam.